Friday, November 7, 2014

Struggling with this page

Page four is fine:
It leads into page five, which is giving me trouble. I'd ike some feedback on this page and possibly some suggestions on how to make it a stronger page.
Thanks, Angelee


So, i decided to lighten the window... 

2 comments:

  1. Making progress! We'll discuss in today's workshop.

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  2. I'm revising. I'll edit to show the current state of that page.

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