Wordless Backstory : Hilary Pillette's... The Life of Bird?

I'm still wrestling with what to call this angry bird. I'm not sure I want to tell an autobiographical tale through him either. He may just need to take off on his own and tell me why he's holding that pool cue.... He's a detective! Living in San Francisco. He goes on a search to find a missing woman only to discover he IS the missing woman! Some nights he goes to meet with an old buddy of his from rehab, Bubba, to play pool and discuss his latest findings. Its at one of these meetings that they run into Larry Von Hamlish, Devil Worshipper and Kayak Enthusiast, who takes them on a wild ride around the city that gets them into serious trouble with the law and causes them both to rethink their whole identities!! Or... something. ;)

Please note. I'm NOT DONE! ;) That hideous bubble gum pink path and the colors on the floor under his feet need to be finished. I was trying to white them out, but came to find out, acrylic paint (titanium white) will just get absorbed by 111 lb matte drawing paper. AND.. who the F knew?? Inks work better on Bristol board too. Next time! Or... If I want to take this somewhere, I'll use Kim's suggestion to use tracing vellum and redo it on the right surface.

KIM! PUT YOUR SHIT UP! ;)